Who would've known

Who would've known

A Poem by Lechusa

Who would've known that time would pass,
That I would eventually understand,
What the world had to offer
Or not...
Who would've known that I was always going against the grain,
While going in the same direction,
That I'd eventually open my eyes,
To see what was really there,
Who would've known...
Not me.

© 2018 Lechusa


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Gee
What've first line, would've
We all of us have our dreams and wishes mostly these never materialising, but it will not stop us nonetheless. And if you want really odd dreams eat a pound of cheddar before nipping off to bed, man that stuff does weird things to the brain

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lechusa

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the correction for the first line. Never even noticed it!
Yeah eating a pound of .. read more
Gee

5 Years Ago

My pleasure. Bit rich really me correcting anybody as I'm as thick as a brick :))
I love how this poem is open ended
I cud relate to it on my own terms
Glad you wrote this
Its amazing

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Lechusa

5 Years Ago

Pia, it only too me a year to write back to you. Sincere apologies. Thank you for reading, I'm glad .. read more

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Lechusa
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I'm a new poet that enjoys to write but haven't quite figured out what style is my own. I like to write about love,politics, Inapirational pieces and also Spanish poems. I'm very open to feedback,I .. more..

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