BULLETS FOR PEACE

USING these activities that I got when reviewing OG"s friends Read between the loins. 'ING 'ING

BULLETS FOR PEACE

Peering into the looking glass, I caught glimpse of Gandhi bowling.
While the North K was relaunching and global threats were flashing,
Dough & euros were tanking, milk was staining,
and the pharaohs were lunching on our freedom.
Big bro was watching while our blood ran o' the land
Wire taps began clicking as the bomb went off in our heads
And the fleshy messy mess began circling and exploding into the bulletproof air.

c2011 LLR

Author's Note

This was just a seed back in Mar'10 ...finally finished it 10/21/11//

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is real poetry. You touched on many good subjects in this poem. World going mad and no-one can stop the madness. No weakness in this poem. You open the door to thoughts. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is really good, keep up the good work!

[Ruth]

Brilliant work!
Big Brother is always watching whilst peace is obliterated and manipulated by the day...or second!
Love this!
xoxo

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Gandhi bowling in the looking glass ..Quirky but awesome phrase 4 peace..
Dough & euros also a playful but pointed view of the global economic downturn.
Pharaohs lunching on freedom shows how those dic-tators have a choke hold on the world until revolution frees us..
The world is a chaotic place and this poem enhances that sentiment. Kudos, LeeLee!
GBU