Odd (Acapella version with audio)

Odd (Acapella version with audio)

A Poem by L.Edward
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"Karmakiri"  Original artwork Copyright L. Edward 2013

 

 

 

 

 

I live down south, make noises with my mouth

people stand around and listen to the sound

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

I don't get out, the walls are my friends

they shout out my name the fun never ends

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

It rains in the attic my knees are bees 

they built me an ego with an altar made of cheese

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

I've got no friends just a spotty pink ferret

who sings Brittney Spears in exchange for hash pelletts

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

I've an oinion for an eye but it never ever cries

I hunt for ships in a green gorilla sky

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

I'm scared of my TV, I think it wants to eat me

and when I fall asleep I dream that I'm awake

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

I've a monk for a tooth, its hard to be quiet

I stole my youth from a cop in a riot

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

I read as I walk, I mumble when I talk

I steal sideways glances from a looking glass store

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

I make noises with my mouth, I live down south  

and people stand around and listen to the sound

I'm odd (repeat x 10)

 

It rains in the attic, my knees are bees

they built me ego with an altar made of cheese

I'm odd (repeat x 14)

 

 

© 2013 L.Edward


Author's Note

L.Edward

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Featured Review

This is a most unique and unusual piece, an original, which could be part of a film, it kind of reminds me of a wonderful scene from Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. I think that your execution of this original piece is excellent, powerful and humorous while inviting great sympathy for this pathetic being, all in all, this have great style and imagination, I thoroughly enjoyed :) Very well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Thank you muchly. Always facinating to take a look at my work through your eyes. Awsum, I'm a big fa.. read more



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The MP3 gave it a pulse...this would be a sensation on YouTube! Truly different...ok, it's odd, but it has appeal!



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Wow thank you ever so much. I may just do that. Sounds like a good idea.
I'm afraid of my TV too. Love this quirky bit. Very creative.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Cheers muchly. Yeah no falling asleep in front of it that's for sure.
This is so unique and inventive!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your time and support. Much appreciated. Best wishes.
they built me ego with an altar made of cheese

I'm odd..

Loved it :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Cheers for taking the time for a gander. Peace.
well I can only agree with Pryde....Uniquely ODD

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Mighty kind. Many thanks. Any friend of Pryde's is a friend of mine.
Fantastic. I am going to have RR all my friends with this one. Be prepared to be a sensation. Loved loved loved.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

It's not cheese; it's absurd.
L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Hey I like that. That could be a great ad slogan for some crazy new cheese product. Looks like chees.. read more
Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Hahahahaha
This was so cute with a touch of whimsical elements in it. It rhymes and the beat goes on. Different and unique from all your other woeks...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Cheers friend. Much obliged. Every creative moment poses an utterly unique experience for me. Headsp.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know. You are welcome...:)

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Added on October 5, 2013
Last Updated on October 7, 2013
Tags: odd, strange, unusual, wierd, crazy, alien, eccentric

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L.Edward
L.Edward

Kuki, Saitama, Japan



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I am an English teacher and Shamanic healer living in Japan. I strive to lead a simple life in contact with nature. I'm a peace-loving vegetarian, I mediate, practice yoga, sing and play a baby conga .. more..

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