When I write

When I write

A Poem by Ashley G.
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Derp....wanted to write a poem. Here it is.

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Thoughts speed from my head to my fingers

Words pop out on the page

Emotions linger

As rhymes form 

 Pages torn 

Because thoughts do not come across

I fearfully at a loss

Turn to others for advice

Try to make it sound nice 

and put it away 

To wait for another day...

© 2013 Ashley G.


Author's Note

Ashley G.
Blah...can you tell how bored I am?...Sorry if it's not great, I wrote this on a whim.

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I like this. It's very nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ashley G.

8 Years Ago

Thanks!
i fearfully at a loss would sound better as i'm fearfully at a loss
other than that you did a great job:) nice rhyme scheme good rhythm

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice job, when did you write it?

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

what color are nabranas eyes?
Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

Black. Really? What kind of question is that? They are blue.
Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

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