Dream patchwork

Dream patchwork

A Poem by Leftbehind

Seams of dreams, tatter and fray
One room leads to another, time in replay
Awareness creeps through, grasping the direction
Lucidity blinds the veil, push out of this dimension

© 2017 Leftbehind


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The first two lines grabbed ahold of me, I felt I could follow, or better to say, led by you. I apologize I couldn’t stay on the path you were leading me down with the last two lines. However, your poem was very strong and spoke well for being 4 lines in length.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leftbehind

2 Years Ago

The last two lines are when you begin to lucid dream and you gain control instead of going in circle.. read more



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I would love to have a lucid dream. Especially when with a pretty girl. lol :)

Nice one.

Posted 4 Months Ago


The first two lines grabbed ahold of me, I felt I could follow, or better to say, led by you. I apologize I couldn’t stay on the path you were leading me down with the last two lines. However, your poem was very strong and spoke well for being 4 lines in length.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leftbehind

2 Years Ago

The last two lines are when you begin to lucid dream and you gain control instead of going in circle.. read more

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Added on February 11, 2017
Last Updated on February 16, 2017
Tags: Poem, short, dreams, lucid

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Leftbehind
Leftbehind

Texas city, TX



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A Poem by Leftbehind