Alliteration Articulating Love Lost

Alliteration Articulating Love Lost

A Poem by Legion
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something for the workout

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Alliteration Articulating Love Lost



Stagnant within the emptiness of sedentary emotion,
Between breaths birthed by boredom,
Conjured the callousness of contempt
Fabricating and formulating the foibles.
Excuses entertained equaled expiration
Lacerating love without lamentation in its loss.


Legion
13OCT14

© 2014 Legion


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Hard to keep the alliteration so tight and still deliver a meaningful message. Workout successful!

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 5 Years Ago


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I write about various topics. Mostly I write poetry/songs. I took my screen name from a concept album/epic poem I wrote years ago titled "Legion's Legacy: Tales of the Damned" which was inspired by .. more..

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