The Wind

The Wind

A Poem by Legolas

Sakura tree shakes

against the eternal wind-

stops with gentle snow

© 2012 Legolas


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Words can't quite describe why I like this poem. It could just be taken so many different ways and means so much on a deeper level. I'm not sure if you meant it that way, but it's brilliant either way.

Gah. My brain is overwhelmed with the brilliance of it. So simple, yet perfect.

I do think this is your best poem. It's one of the best I've ever read, actually. Really, really, really nicely written. It's the right blend of emotions, and emphasis, and just... MRWEH.

Yeah, I'll stop babbling now, but excellent, excellent, glorious write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

10 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much. I did mean for it to have a deep meaning. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. A.. read more



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I love this haiku. It paints such a beautiful, vivid image in my mind, every word adding layers to it, adding depth. I love how you described the event taking place, the elegant, flowing words you used. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Your reviews always mean a lot.
Isabelle Faye

11 Years Ago

I mean every one of them.
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Pax
beautiful imagery. I like it.
sakura trees are always very beautiful to see.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

11 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on August 20, 2012
Last Updated on August 20, 2012
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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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