I like this, the color you chose to write this in adds to the summer feel of the piece. When reading this you do such a great job at bringing the reader to a place of your memories. I can envision the fields, and grass. the ears of corn. Although it may be different here in the US, I can hear noises of summer, frogs, crickets and children laughing. You do this in such a short piece. This is wonderful. With summer almost over, it makes me kinda of sad to read this, but in a good way! This is a great piece!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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I have a time in my life that was just like this.. I often wonder about those days and the beauty and innocence that was experienced then.. I just love this..xo
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