Corn Field

Corn Field

A Poem by Leigh

 

I am in love with the girl with the golden hair

She runs like a child in the fields

Her hair flows so free

Like a sea of corn behind her

 

Once she said “Come now and chase me”

And we ran through the path she wove

And very soon I held her near

In the middle of a sudden cloudburst

 

She flushed deepest rose as we pressed together

Hiding from the sudden torrent

But did it rain just then? I couldn’t tell

I was blocked by the landscape of her

© 2013 Leigh


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I'm pretty sure I chased that chick around the Tobacco fields when I was growing up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Leigh

4 Years Ago

Sounds like another poem...over to you
You are clearly in love with this girl, for if it rains and you can not feel it, then the sun must be shining on the two of you. How lucky you are to have such love that makes unpleasand weather disappear when you are together.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Matching Socks

5 Years Ago

:-)
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Matching Socks

5 Years Ago

Been a pleasure to read your poems.

I like going through and reading a bunch at a tim.. read more
Leigh

5 Years Ago

Thanks to you
A remarkable poem with a strong sense of love clearly expressed in it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Leigh

5 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by
A beautiful poem. I like the places you took me. Good to roam with the golden hair girl in the field of corn. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Leigh

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much Coyote
Romantic and beautiful! Your words paint a sunny and innocent picture in my mind. Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Leigh

6 Years Ago

Thank you
This is very lovely and sweet. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Leigh

6 Years Ago

Of all my poems I do like this one
I live the deepest shade if rose

Posted 6 Years Ago


it's so simple and sweet
and I love how you put " the landscape of her"
Im usually not a romance person but I loved this

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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It is simple. Only lacked the depth that I look for in most poems. Beautiful imagery though...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leigh

6 Years Ago

Thank-you
Beautiful poetry.. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leigh

7 Years Ago

Oh thanks

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