Foolish love

Foolish love

A Poem by Ina Waltz

Don’t hold me so tight
foolish love
my bones are breakable 
and my veins are so delicate

Don’t hold me so tight
foolish love
time moves swiftly in your arms
and I can’t feel my skin anymore

© 2012 Ina Waltz


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Short, sweet and too the point. Those are my favorite kind of poems. I could feel the raw emotion play throughout the entire piece, which was written quite wonderfully. Great work.
I loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ina Waltz

11 Years Ago

Glad to hear that you loved it! Thank you for your lovely review.

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Added on August 13, 2012
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Tags: love, intimate, poetry, romance

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Ina Waltz
Ina Waltz

Zagreb, -- Please Select --, Croatia



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I write poetry and short stories. I also draw and paint abstract images that my mind creates in order to understand the world and myself. I cannot live without creative outlet; when I don't write/pain.. more..

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