da-da-da for two Irish boyos

da-da-da for two Irish boyos

A Poem by Leslie Philibert
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For Samuel Beckett and James Joyce

"
peace of mind of of of
mind of peace ?
peace ? mind ?
piece of mine ? mine !
mein piece. me in mind...
in me. peaceofmindof.
ofpeace,ofmine -
mine mine mine !
piece piece piece !
of of of of of.

© 2012 Leslie Philibert


Author's Note

Leslie Philibert
I`m just messing about with homophones and punctuation.
This will be removed in a few days, it`s just a literary joke.
The last line is supposed to sound like a dog barking

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i think the dedication should extend to eugene ionesco as well. this is quite reminiscent of his play The Bald Soprano, where conversation and language degenerates into simple sounds.

Posted 12 Years Ago


reminds me of lucky's soliloquy in waiting for godot. there seems to be no rhyme or reason to it. but it sounds truly intellectual and rich in meaning shrouded in the absurdity of his speech. it is a fantastic and ironic ending as both becket and joyce implement. joyce being completely intelligible to me. love this piece. love the intention.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Though this doesn't make sense, it's funny. The last line does indeed sound like a dog barking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


lol !! Got to have fun !

Posted 12 Years Ago


and the last line certainly does, very neat. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this. It's a fun poem. Poetry should be many things and fun is one of them!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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. ah ... perhaps mr. beckett and mr. joyce are smiling at these words ... i must also add that looking for that peace is as exasperating as you described ... please don't remove this little gem of a poem ... :) ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


i don't know of any rule that poetry can't be fun

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Leslie Philibert
Leslie Philibert

Bavaria, Germany



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