Hush Little Baby

Hush Little Baby

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

Hush little baby,

Don't you cry.

Don't go to sleep,

With thoughts of goodbye.

Put down that razer.

Put down that knife.

Don't make tonight,

The last night of your life.

I know its hard.

I know its tough.

But dont say,

That you've had enough.

So little darling,

Wipe away your tears.

And I'll be here,

To take away your fears.

 

© 2013 Secret Lullaby


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Love this poem! Really sweet!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love this. Beautifully written and I love how you used a nursery rhyme.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love this. Especially the nursery rhyme intro.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the nursey rhyme begining. It gives the poem more meaning.

Posted 10 Years Ago


WOW! :))
I love your selection of words. I love the rhyme. I love the theme.
I love the entire poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was really great and I'm sure many people need to read something like that and can relate to it. Loved this poem very much.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kinda creepy nursery rhyme. Good rhyme

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's nice to have a shoulder to cry on every now & then when life becomes too unbearable to live through. Great work Secret Lullaby. An intriguing write & read. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Everyone needs someone to help them out every once in awhile. I like how this flows, the only thing that threw me off was "The last night of you life." It would read better with your instead of "you."

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


awwwwwe this is adorable and sweet and kind of you to write for somebody! i love this poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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