Words of the broken hearted

I've been bruised.

Ive been broken.

Ive been chained,

And ripped open.

I've been put down.

I've been put a side.

I've been left with scars,

That were too deep to hide.

I've never known a love,

That didnt break my heart.

I've never seen the light.

  I've always been stuck in the dark.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[R.M.W.]

"I've never known a love,
That didn't break my heart.
I've never seen the light.
I've always been stuck in the dark."

I feel like I can really relate to this piece. Wonderful job, dear :)

[CriticalxxAngel]

Great rhymes here. I loved the emotions shown in this poem and thought it was a very good write.

[Personne]

Don't mind me just wiping away the my tears here; but honestly! This is such a simply poem, but packs a huge punch. It flows so well too. It is simply amazing, I love it. I had to read it twice and really pay attention to it to realize how hard and austere this poem is. I love it; it is just great.

[Michael Thrower]

Great poem and rhyme! It reads rather quick, meaning it flows well. Best part is, you got your point across and told us something about yourself; and you did it well. So good job on that. On the story of the poem itself, it's saddening and I wish I could give you some words to soothe that sadness away, but one thing I can say is don't worry. You will find the right person one day, as everyone says. Yes, it sounds like words going from one ear and out the other, but it is true. You will find that person. The catch is- You have to believe that you'll find that person. Be patient. That truly is a virtue.

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! I know exactly how you feel! Amazing poem!!!

[Keith LaFountaine]

Very dark and gritty. We all know what it's like to feel this way, though when we experience it we feel like our experience is different in some fashion. You penned the anger and sadness beautifully here. Excellent work. And chin up. Things change as we get older.

[Scott Mou]

I like this. The ryming is good and i feel like the content was excellent, it seemed like you put some real thought and emotion into this. Another great poem

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like the flow of this even though it is kinda sad. Yet, I know where you are coming from and I have felt like this in the past. I have seen the light and now know a greater love, and I hope I can keep my eyes on Him. There is a time for us all to find that something to help put the broken pieces together, perhaps someday that time will come to you also.

Good Job

[Alex Vidmar]

This is great. Everyone can relate to this, whether they like to admit it or not, and you've captured that perfectly!