I Wish

I Wish

A Poem by Peyton Light
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A poem about someone who I desperatly miss.

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Are you near? Are you far?

I wish I was where you are.

I wish you dreamt of me at night.

I wish I had you in my sight.

I hurt you, now I pay the price.

Will I ever have you in my life?

I’d do anything just to see your face.

I wish I had you in my embrace.

I miss you so badly, I hurt every day.

I guess this is the price I pay.

© 2016 Peyton Light


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People can easily relate to this one. So many people make mistakes and, in consequence, lose someone very dear to them. It is a painful thing to endure. Mistakes are not easily forgiven, if only it were so easy.

I too have made a mistake and, in reaction, lost someone I love more than anyone, how I am going to deal with that, I don't know, but I will seek to manage. I do hope you find reconciliation for the mistake you assumptuously made. Well done, full rates.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Peyton Light

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I try to make my poems very relatable as they are usually about things I am going through.. read more
Obscured by the Shadows

6 Years Ago

And in turn, the discover they are not the only ones feeling that way, very well done.



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I really like this one. It's so damn amazing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very deep and emotional and quite heartbreaking.
Comes straight from your heart.
So much feeling in this and depth.
The rhyme scheme in this is great it rhymes the whole way through, and the rhymes are flawless.
Great write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Leo
I like the rhythm and melody in your poem..read with natural flow and ease..way to go!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Peyton Light

6 Years Ago

Thanks you very much :)
People can easily relate to this one. So many people make mistakes and, in consequence, lose someone very dear to them. It is a painful thing to endure. Mistakes are not easily forgiven, if only it were so easy.

I too have made a mistake and, in reaction, lost someone I love more than anyone, how I am going to deal with that, I don't know, but I will seek to manage. I do hope you find reconciliation for the mistake you assumptuously made. Well done, full rates.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Peyton Light

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I try to make my poems very relatable as they are usually about things I am going through.. read more
Obscured by the Shadows

6 Years Ago

And in turn, the discover they are not the only ones feeling that way, very well done.
Short and beautiful. The use of "now I pay the price/this is the price I pay" on lines 5 and 10 was well executed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Every prayer is a wish fulfilled in due time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hello, Peyton, your message here is clear. Why not give it a nice meter?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Peyton Light

6 Years Ago

What do you mean "Meter"?
Caleb

6 Years Ago

meter is the beat in which a poem follows. It insures that the poem is not choppy and gives it a cer.. read more

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A Poem by Peyton Light