Making Love To The Rain

Let's make love to the rain....

Making Love To The Rain

Did you ever taste the rain?

Salty little drops of bliss at the tip of your tongue.

 

Did you ever feel the heavenly shower

Trickle down your thirsty skin?

 

Did you ever bear the weight of soaked clothes

Wrapping your frame so tightly,

It became hard to breathe?

Did you feel the pleasure of sweet suffocation?

 

Did you ever inhale the intoxicating scent of wet hair?

The long strands hanging loosely down your bare back?

Did you feel it tickle your sensitive skin?

 

Were you ever a slave to heaven’s divine downpour?

Did you ever make love to the rain?

Author's Note

I love the rain...and I love Love, so I blended the two together. What do you think?

Reviews

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I love the rain 2! ^.^ Great questions u did, they really stuck to the poem and gave a great flow and rhythm! 100/100

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks so much Katerina:-):-):-D.

[.]

no prob! :D

[Abdul Aziz]

A poem that appreciates natural beauty. Boy, have these become rare! A nicely written, delightful read that shows your appreciation of the beauty around us.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank u so much Abdul:-):-):-D.

[Rachelle Tudor]

I am in love with this! It gave me an amazing image of the rain I miss so much! Absolutely Beautiful!!

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank u. Glad u loved it:-):-):-D.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Did you ever inhale the intoxicating scent of wet hair?.......oh yes! sensual, beautiful!

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Woo...thanks:-):-):-D.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this because i never thought it was really about rain...a nice subtle metaphor in this..

sensual.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you so much Jacob:-):-):-D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this!... The rain is magical.. I have felt and tasted the rain, it is indeed a great lover...
Intoxicating write!~xo~:)

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you so much Robbie:-):-):-D.

[Helena]

Beautiful poem, soft and free flowing. Imagery superb....makes me want to run out in the rain now!

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you:-):-):-D.

[A Nomad]

Its fresh... loved it

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you:-):-):-D.

[Tymothy L Smith]

I like this piece. Often i am pushed away from repetitive questions, but in the end, is rather like a zen question: 'you've been in the rain, but were you just hurrying to get away from it, like you do with life, or did you make love to it?'
Like the image that goes with too, very sexy...

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you so much for your beautiful review... I am glad you liked it:-):-):-D.