Free Falling

Free Falling

A Poem by Poussiere D'Ange
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Going down....

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Free Falling

 

Haul me down

No pause

No stopping

Just free falling.

 

Going down towards the unknown

Where angels fear to tread

And devils lurk in the shadows

Towards a past so dreadful, so grim.

 

I wish I was lighter

Let air resistance keep me floating

Let physics play its role on me

But I’m just too outwardly

Too…alien.

 

Is this life?

Free falling, never stopping?

Is this the way to live?

Is death really the end of it all,

Or is there something more to it?

Something worse, something more frightening.

 

 

 

© 2013 Poussiere D'Ange


Author's Note

Poussiere D'Ange
I know it's bad...any way to improve?

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Pax
its a great start for a insightful life you'll have... i never thought life can be a free falling, perhaps most of the time , often times it isn't...

for example in terms of love, you free fall and chances are someone will catch you or not...

in a way perhaps free falling is almost like keep moving on/keep moving forward, only a few moments pause for a break but never a full stop...

death, its frightening indeed... and i also think there is more to it than its the end...

great piece my friend....

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Poussiere D'Ange

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much dear Paxy....it's always wonderful to hear your thoughts:-):-):-D.
Pax

5 Years Ago

hey you, it's been awhile... good to see you and read from you... and your most welcome :)



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a note about your authors note... it's not a.bad piece at all. the concept of the poem can really stay open-sourceended so that the reader had interchanges to connect with the piece. feeling alien can fall into the realms of lots of experiences. I like that. Thanks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Let air resistance keep me floating"

I think personifying air would add a little more to the effect of the second stanza, so:

"Let air's resistance keep me floating"

everything else is good to me :) nice work

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Pax
its a great start for a insightful life you'll have... i never thought life can be a free falling, perhaps most of the time , often times it isn't...

for example in terms of love, you free fall and chances are someone will catch you or not...

in a way perhaps free falling is almost like keep moving on/keep moving forward, only a few moments pause for a break but never a full stop...

death, its frightening indeed... and i also think there is more to it than its the end...

great piece my friend....

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poussiere D'Ange

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much dear Paxy....it's always wonderful to hear your thoughts:-):-):-D.
Pax

5 Years Ago

hey you, it's been awhile... good to see you and read from you... and your most welcome :)
Never think your work is bad, I respect the idea that you want to improve, we all do but by no means is your writing bad. This poem speaks to me more like lyrics to a song of break through. It's not depressing like how most people would imagine the concept of falling down from something, in life to be.. it's more like you're questioning the journey of getting up, what's next perhaps? I liked this, bunches n bunches.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Poussiere D'Ange

6 Years Ago

Whoo thanks..that's awesome to hear. Thanks bunches n bunches:-D.
I can imagine a body hurtling towards Earth and get imaginings from your imagery so the words have done their job, no improvements required.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Poussiere D'Ange

6 Years Ago

Thanks Leigh:-):-):-D.
I love this one. Very very good. It is so deep and emotional!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Poussiere D'Ange

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much:-):-):-D.
I thought it was good. It was simple and from the heart. When writing is done from the heart, it can only be a masterpiece. I was also drawn to it because Tom Petty has a song with the same title:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Poussiere D'Ange

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rebecca. Ill check out the song:-):-):-D.
Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

It's a good one:) :)
great love as m engineering student :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


What's bad? Life? Sure it is. Free falling? Maybe, but the poem is quite good, showed the ups and downs, well mostly the down of this pathetic life of ours....great job

Posted 6 Years Ago


Poussiere D'Ange

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for all your reviews Nick. Ill get back to your work as soon as possible:-):-):-D.
"Let physics play its role on me"
I love the style of this poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Poussiere D'Ange

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anna:-):-):-D.

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