A Mermaid In Love

Fell in love with water....

A mermaid in love

 

Tonight I’m blue

Floating on the cold water of a lonely lake

Whose bed is thick with seaweed

But the water is crystal clear.

 

The coldness hurts my veins

But soothes my pulse

Goldfishes kiss

My bloodless cheeks

And hums a sweet lullaby.

 

Soft inaudible footsteps break my solitude

Pale bare feet against wet coarse earth

I feel ripples against my naked frame

And hear a soft splash.

 

I sigh as you pull me close

My poor goldfishes ran away

Scared by your toughness

They are delicate

So am I.

 

But no one understands my softness

The way you do

So I let you feel my beloved coldness

And welcome you into my humble abode

I let you feel my frozen pulse

 

And I give you

My everything.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

So whatcha think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the gentle feel of the thoughts and the desire. I like the use of the Mermaid. Create good vision and peaceful places to be. No weakness in the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks so much Coyote for that wonderful review:-):-):-D.

[Rebecca Buller]

This was a very soothing and relaxing piece. I can feel my own "pale bare feet against wet coarse earth." Very beautifully written:)

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you so much Rebecca:-):-):-D.

[s y e]

Wow, I loved this, you've written it really well. :-)

Awesome job!!!

~ Noodle. 100/100

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks so much NoodleDoodle:-):-):-D.