Dedication to A. Rose

Dedication to A. Rose

A Poem by Levana Hyll
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A poem I wrote inspired by another poet's poem... A. Rose's FOREVER HIS

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I once read a poem by A. Rose... that made me think and write in prose...

A very beautiful piece of how I USED to be....

a person who loved others, gladly and free.

My heart was always stepped on, trampled and burned,

and I knew that there was a lesson that had to be learned...

Learn to love yourself first and foremost,

and never give them anything with which to boast...

And the most import lesson of love...

is that the greastest one comes from up above.
 

GREAT poem, A.Rose! Inspired me to write one myself! =)

 

© 2009 Levana Hyll


Author's Note

Levana Hyll
Have no idea whee this came from because I do not write poetry. But it ws fun!

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Wonderful job! I bet more can be written by you! This flowed nicely and was so beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this! It was written very well and I feel honored to be the inspiration! The only thing is I regret not reading this sooner. I haven't been on in quite some time. This was a wonderful piece! Way to go!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely easy flow & I agree w/the consensus--write more poetry, Lev!!
Especially loved these straightforward & candid lines:
~~A very beautiful piece of how I USED to be...
A person who loved others, gladly and free..~~
Let the poetry bug keep biting...
LLR

Posted 9 Years Ago


It was really beautiful and sweet... nice little piece, maybe you should try more poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is a very pretty poem with a great lesson in it. Also for someone who doesn't write poetry this was very well done and flowed wonderfully. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful =) Thats all i can say.
Keep up the good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, I know that writer!
lol, I enjoyed reading this poem!
It was wonderful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is wonderful.
Lovely write here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


it was nice, just one mistake, you spelled gladly wrong. all in all it was good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Levana Hyll
Levana Hyll

Boca Raton, FL



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