REDESIGNED

REDESIGNED

A Poem by Levi
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Just working on Blues lyrics

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Redesigned

Touch me all over, baby
Until my body begins to rise
Touch me all over, baby
Until my eyes are in the skies

Kiss me forever, baby
To explode my state of mind
Kiss me forever, baby
To evolve my edges of time

Make love to me, baby
Let me be your rock and roll
Make love to me, baby
Let me redesign your soul

© 2022 Levi


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Levi
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Nice! Wondering, If you are fluent in any other language? Me, so so. Loved this piece.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Levi

1 Week Ago

Thanks for the feedback. I took French in college, but that was years ago. Have a great day
Finding that person who makes you see things you never did before. Challenges you in every way possible. Pushing your romantic limits. Redesign me I'm open for suggestions. Solid work.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Levi

1 Week Ago

Thanks, it's experimental because the song has no chorus. Have a great day
duff

1 Week Ago

You're welcome and I love blues.

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Added on May 13, 2022
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Levi
Levi

San Francisco, CA



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