REDESIGNED

Just working on Blues lyrics

Redesigned

Touch me all over, baby
Until my body begins to rise
Touch me all over, baby
Until my eyes are in the skies

Kiss me forever, baby
To explode my state of mind
Kiss me forever, baby
To evolve my edges of time

Make love to me, baby
Let me be your rock and roll
Make love to me, baby
Let me redesign your soul

Author's Note

Critiques welcome

Reviews

[cheyenne s garcia]

Nice! Wondering, If you are fluent in any other language? Me, so so. Loved this piece.

[Levi]

Thanks for the feedback. I took French in college, but that was years ago. Have a great day

[duff]

Finding that person who makes you see things you never did before. Challenges you in every way possible. Pushing your romantic limits. Redesign me I'm open for suggestions. Solid work.

[Levi]

Thanks, it's experimental because the song has no chorus. Have a great day

[duff]

You're welcome and I love blues.