Manic Metropolis

Just a simple quatrain

Welcome to the manic metropolis

Where you eyes are always fooled
 
Just a part of the synthesis

Of this very sick world

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Title quickly caught my attention. It could be a book! The darkness of the mind comes unveiled in your words, revealing a depth of pain and angst around us every day.

[Libby McKeown]

I enjoyed this; it says quite a bit with so little. I have to say that "sick" doesn't feel right. Maybe "tired," or maybe something sardonic like "shiny." A mere suggestion. Thanks for sharing!

[P.S I Love You]

Short but Sweet Very Nice :) :]

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

Short and sweet! I like it :)

[Frantzuu]

Great piece, short but straight to the point. :D

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"Where you eyes are always fooled" "your"...interesting short poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I feel as if I am getting off of a train and I'm being overwhelmed by the sights and sounds. A warning. I can see it all. You gave us just enough to put the imagination to work.

[JenLyn]

Short to the point, yet says a lot. Nice, I like it. :)

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

Sharp. I definitely like it.

-Elissa :D