Whispers

Whispers

A Poem by Levioshock
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Just a poem I got from a little inspiration

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Find me a word

Heed my call

Songs from a bird

Waiting on the wall

 

Can you hear me?

Can you not?

Please my angel

Don’t fear the dark

 

Nay the bee

Calm the trees

The Willow’s whisper

Your sweet kiss

 

Come to me

My dark eyed maiden

Play me you

Sweetened cadence

 

Take my hand

And follow me

While we rest

In the sea

© 2010 Levioshock


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Beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Poetry always loses me. I must just be a poetry illiterate.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think you mean "your" when you say "Play me you." It doesn't really make sense until you stop to just read it and not analyse it. To analyse it, confuses people I bet but to take it all in as a whole, it speaks of love. Love unattainable. Lovely read my dear.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was lovely! :) Thanks for the read!! Keep up the writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good poem about ocean and love.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I feel a fantasy based twist within this, which is quite interesting. The elements of nature (trees, the sea) make this piece something not to be overlooked. Im not sure why, I just really find it eye catching. Overall, the piece is decent and quite promising.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this a lot:)

The flow sucks you in lol Thats a good thing! lol xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


A gentle and beautiful poem. I like the feel and motion of your words. Complete poem was outstanding. I like the ending a lot. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like the end. it was unique and strange, but the feeling fitted the poem. great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very very nice. Its just a really nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 12, 2010
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Levioshock
Levioshock

Copley, OH



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