Whispers

Whispers

A Poem by Levioshock
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Just a poem I got from a little inspiration

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Find me a word

Heed my call

Songs from a bird

Waiting on the wall

 

Can you hear me?

Can you not?

Please my angel

Don’t fear the dark

 

Nay the bee

Calm the trees

The Willow’s whisper

Your sweet kiss

 

Come to me

My dark eyed maiden

Play me you

Sweetened cadence

 

Take my hand

And follow me

While we rest

In the sea

© 2010 Levioshock


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magnificent write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Woooah! AMAZING!!! Loved it. loved it. Loved it! This is beautiful from the beginning to the end. I loved it all!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I felt that this had an innocent vibe to it. It's like you covered deep emotions and emotions in a way that anyone could listen to, but only adults would understand. Great poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I thought this was a very fun and playful write. It has a real nice positive feel to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm not sure but I believe you want "heed my call." Heed is a verb that calls for careful attention - or pay attention.
From there very nice, very sensual. I like the use of very little words to convey want and dedication. The work does reflect a sensual realm but also deeper and call to devotion and longevity in relationship. Very well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


Gentle and pretty, striking

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is a gentle beauty to your words that sings throughout the world around you. Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


An interesting poem. One of those elusive "I wrote it based on a dream" kind of poems. Doesn't exacly register on the "making sense" chart and yet you can understand the feeling . . . good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great flow, and it's very well written, that's my honest opinion. keep it up :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow: BEAUTIFUL! Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 12, 2010
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Levioshock
Levioshock

Copley, OH



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