Helping find someone

Helping find someone

A Poem by . o O (Deepest_Thoughts)





Those eyes looking straight at me,

So empty and dull.

I wish I could only see,

Why they bury into my skull.


They look all wrong,

Full of sorrow and despair.

But they look so strong,

And yet they do stare.


Your body language has changed,

Giving off a small threat.

This seems so deranged,

But I feel like we just met.


The new you wants me to leave,

To be gone and never to return.

But with that the real you would grieve,

So my back I will not turn.


I know your still in there,

Behind a locked door.

So I will sit here and glare,

Emotions ready to soar.


I want to free you,

From this prison your in.

He wont let me through,

I swear he wont win.


I say things to make you smile,

Hoping you can still hear.

This being my style,

Minus the fear.


I see a glint in your eyes,

The strange you fighting it.

I can see through his lies.

Not fooling me one bit.


The ice has been broken,

His shield taken down.

The real you has spoken,

But still there is a frown.


I wont stop trying,

I will find the key.

If not, I risk dying,

The real you inside crying.


I say that I love you,

It is not a lie.

You know it to be true,

Or I would have said my goodbye.


The darkness has cleared,

The light now your guide.

Nothing more to be feared,

With one swift stride.


My arms open wide,

You hug me so slow.

Both glad that I tried,

Never letting go.

© 2009 . o O (Deepest_Thoughts)

Author's Note

. o O (Deepest_Thoughts)
This poem goes out to my very best friend. He was going through some hard times and I knew I had to be their for him. And well I don't really care if the poem has some problems because I wouldn't dare change it. So enjoy and feel free to comment. <3

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you are a very good friend...

nice work...

Posted 10 Years Ago

beautiful,sweet, cute and i loved it completely!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very nice

Posted 10 Years Ago

Increases my pharanohia but I wont give you an inch of criticism..only.. well done.. x0x0x0x

Posted 10 Years Ago

a beautiful piece

Posted 10 Years Ago

Awhhhh cutenesss I loveee it :) and i your best friend ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like the poem buddi! but i thought i was your very best friend *pout* lol love you anyway!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Awesome and not just because im your aunt !! The feeling you have behind your words just shows how much love you have to give :) always stay this way and dont let anyone change that..

Posted 11 Years Ago

WOW this piece is�what can I say just amazingly powerful and brilliant!!! There is so much meaning behind your words its breath taking. You have a tremendous amount of talent!!! Wonderful writ!!!!


Posted 11 Years Ago

Very well. It's a good poem, and well written and felt. Excellent

Posted 11 Years Ago

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