Did i make a mistake?

Did i make a mistake?

A Poem by Lexi =]
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I know this sucks.. i haven't written in forever had no inspiration...

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I broke up with him
I still love him
I had to do it though
We had troubles
You stopped basing our love on trust
But you based it with lust.
I ignored your seductive ways
Thinking that your old self was still there
Your wants of having sex
Got worse…way worse
It takes you forever 
to understand no
I felt it was best that I ended it
But I still care and love you
And your just making me feel guilty
Did I make a mistake?

© 2010 Lexi =]


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I believe you did the right thing. Even though your actions hurt at the time, it's gonna be better in the long run. Good write =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


A perfect example of one of life's learning lessons and moments of choice. I think the course of life in the piece was the safe one. With a world so crazy, better do what's right for you, than let another dominate your decisions.

Good poem!
Aaron Wolfie Maycroft

Posted 14 Years Ago


that was a very good decision. really strong.
very well written, too :3

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I have to say, no, you did the right thing.

Anyway, good poem. xD

Posted 14 Years Ago


If this was a true story, then good on you for dumping him! People need to learn to accept others opinions.
The poem is really good. I can see it from your Point Of View, but I still reckon it's really well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 20, 2010
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Lexi =]
Lexi =]

Houston, TX



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Hey! I am Alexis. Most call me lexi! (which I rather) and Im 13. I like all kinds of music. My main genres though are Dance and Electronic and Alternative and Rock. My favorite person ever is Mitc.. more..

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