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 I'm a 15 year old mute goth girl and I don't belong anywhere. People take advantage of me and talk down, they beat and rape me. Messed up right? But you dont know the half of it. My mother died giving birth to me, now I live with my older sister and she's a s**t! She always has a new boyfriend everyweek. She treats me like s**t and I think I'm going to explode! But I have a secret that's going to leave them breathless.

Author's Note

Just something I thought of on the stop. Do you think I should continue?

Reviews

[Tears Forgotten]

it looks really good....

[Xyve rrg]

it's going to be good story if you want it to especially if you highlight the humanistic and realistic side...
i can sense violence, darkness... but you can make a meaningful story if you really think about this hard...
...a story so good... moving... gripping...
good luck!

[Papercuts.Hate.You.Too]

yes you should keep writing it
and you should tell me the secret
(message it so no one else can see it)
i want to see where this story goes
leylia