did u

this is more of a song than a poem...its a part off of one of my songs...

did you ever really love me

did you even want me back

did  you even think o fwhat you lacked

would you have really died for me

would you ever get on one knee

would you even cry the way i did

can you tell me you really love me

can you tell me you want u back

can you tell me you'd take a bullet for me

i can tell you i love you always

i can tell you i'll miss you for the rest of my days

i can tell you i love ou thru & thru

please help me get rid of this pain

& please don't bring me to shame

Author's Note

i was hurt really bad when i wrote this

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

I have been there and it sucks.
You poured a lot of pain out in this piece
Great job sweetheart!!

Orlando M

[Violeta]

sorry you were hurt, I hope it helped you sharing your feelings. its actually really good, I love the repetition... it helps me get the feeling a bit more.

[QuietPoet]

I am sorry you were hurt. I can understand. Hope you heal your heart.