did u

did u

A Poem by Lezlie
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this is more of a song than a poem...its a part off of one of my songs...

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did you ever really love me

did you even want me back

did  you even think o fwhat you lacked

would you have really died for me

would you ever get on one knee

would you even cry the way i did

can you tell me you really love me

can you tell me you want u back

can you tell me you'd take a bullet for me

i can tell you i love you always

i can tell you i'll miss you for the rest of my days

i can tell you i love ou thru & thru

please help me get rid of this pain

& please don't bring me to shame

© 2008 Lezlie


Author's Note

Lezlie
i was hurt really bad when i wrote this

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I have been there and it sucks.
You poured a lot of pain out in this piece
Great job sweetheart!!

Orlando M

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sorry you were hurt, I hope it helped you sharing your feelings. its actually really good, I love the repetition... it helps me get the feeling a bit more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I am sorry you were hurt. I can understand. Hope you heal your heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lezlie
Lezlie

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I'm a small town girl. I'm not that great of a writer but I love to write. I write about different things. I'm a brunette all the way!! I think I spelled that right!! lol.. I'm a christian...I come fr.. more..

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