A Poem by Katie

A moment.

In vibrant purple, I saw
a little girl drinking water
out of the corner of my eye.
In a moment, she became
With clarity, 
the girl she would be, 
the woman she was,
And the children she had left behind...

© 2012 Katie

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Different i like the approach

Posted 9 Years Ago

Brilliant !

This was nearly as difficult as undertaking
an explanation of all that took place in
the moment of a sneeze.

Very well done and interesting to say the

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 9 Years Ago

Puzzles, puzzles, with your poems!! : ) I love it!! I'm still trying to figure this one out past just enjoying myself on your page. xoxo -Mark

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm flattered. =D This one isn't quite a puzzle though -- it's supposed to be more of a .. read more
Patrick Henry

9 Years Ago

It describes, to me, this void of contemplating the reason I am there in that moment whilst observin.. read more

9 Years Ago

Exactly! That moment. Eternity in a moment, where you can feel the time pass as if it doesn't exist .. read more

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Added on December 8, 2012
Last Updated on December 8, 2012
Tags: moment, time, philosophical, life



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