Part one: Junia

Part one: Junia

A Chapter by RachelReaper
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This is the prologue, so read this first!!!

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Junia

   You did end up picking this off the shelf? Good.

   But I'm guessing you looked at the back and thought, "Aw, angels, how cute." and maybe even smiled sweetly. Well then I've got some news to tell you, my friends and I aren't going to be playing harps or lounging on clouds.

   We're warriors.

   Do you know what that means? It means we eradicate the evil in this world so it doesn't hurt, possess, or do any variety of nasty things to all of you. We're protectors, and we're your protectors. And we're the best chance you have.

   Gabriel, one of the supreme angels of Heaven, made up of a group of four of his best warriors. There is Kalilee, who you could call group leader. Rycel, Harler, and, of course Junia (me). We may look like ordinary girls in our late teens, but I'm sorry to say, we're anything but ordinary. Because if you see us on Earth, it means that something is hunting all of you and we can't allow that.  

   We are not gentle, we are not forgiving, and we do not come in peace.

   We are Gabriel's warriors.   



© 2012 RachelReaper


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This is an amazing way to begin this book! Nw I must read more!

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Vibrant lines and creative" Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

thanks
This is really good. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

thanks lol.
This was such a great opening! I absolutely love the last two lines! I'll be reading on!

Posted 6 Years Ago


RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

thanks
Your grammer is wrong when you said "I aren't", that's wrong. It should be "I'm not". Aside from that, this was a great opening!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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K.G
i love with what your going for here. . but the way you written i cant tell if i like it the way it is or if it sounds too. . .concrete and firm/blocky/choppy. . .practice the flow maybe? BUT you deffintly caught my interest so i shall continue to read :3 sounds quite interesting. Did you do research for the angles?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Patrick Henry

6 Years Ago

How to make suggestions without it sounding insulting, how this chapter involves the other ones writ.. read more
RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

thanx guys, your the best
K.G

6 Years Ago

really? iwasnt makeing insults really . . .i was just talking the way i typed. . .and i like her wri.. read more
sounds like she's young and can't wait to see her first battle

Posted 6 Years Ago


RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

you'll see if you keep reading that she's been in this for years.
marie

6 Years Ago

Kk
this chick sounds epic

Posted 6 Years Ago


RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

more of the chapters are up, if you have the time to read them


Posted 6 Years Ago



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