Abstract

Abstract

Metaphorically,

So how would you know

What's real,

What's not?

What's a little

White lie

For the sake

Of the show?

What show,

Or a saying,

But what does

That mean?

Black, Red, Pink,

Green, Purple, Yellow,

Blue, Orange, Grey,

Words across this page

So you think

The words I thought,

How?

Walking through fog

You can't see

What's going to happen

Next...

A serpent attacks a

Restless ship on rocking

Hurricanes!

I made that,

Or did I?

Or are you having

The same hallucination

As I am,

As everyone else who

Reads this?

Whatever you want it,

Good sir, kind ma'am,

No rules for us.

What's to confine?

Everything means

Whatever comes to mind,

We are, after all,

Poetry.

Author's Note

please tell me what you think, and sorry I haven't posted in a while...

Reviews

[WingsToFly]

Very true and wise.
'We are, after all,
Poetry.'
Well done!

[RachelReaper]

:)

[Pax]

Everything means
Whatever comes to mind
~ so true my friend... you have evolve greatly in wisdom and in words...
i think poetry has an abstract personality... it sways of meaning and puzzling riddles...
another awesome work :)

[RachelReaper]

thanks Pax!

[Mary]

stream of consciousness- well done. Stephen King once said that a reader becomes a mind reader every time he reads a story- for at least a brief time, he/she is able to see into the mind of the author who penned the word.

[RachelReaper]

One of hundreds of reasons Stephen King is awesome.

[Mary]

you might enjoy his book "On Writing" loved it, you might too

[RachelReaper]

I'll look into it

[Ohhhwillow]

This is really clever, it has a fast, edgy rhythm that matches the structure and concept, very brilliant!

[RachelReaper]

thank you :)

[Boy of the red]

I really liked it. hard to understand in the begining but i picked it up. geuss im just tired haha. good write

[Jessie]

This is cool :O
I love it ^_^

[MOON]

Lovely write , love the colours enhancing the words, poetry .

[RachelReaper]

shmanks

[Ethale Captor]

AN excellent job. The spontaneous thought of it all is very clear, a great write over all.

[RachelReaper]

thank you Ethale!

[Ethale Captor]

Not a problem. Reviews should be given to such good pieces as this.

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a good write and a great description for poems. Good going here, Ms. rachel reaper

[RachelReaper]

Thank you!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Courtney]

Interesting, and thought provoking. It defiantly describes poetry.

[RachelReaper]

thanks for the review

[Courtney]

My pleasure, thank you for sharing