No Tears

I wrote this to no one in particular

 

No Tears

You can rip out my heart

Smash it into the floor

Stake me

Choke me

Drown me

I'll put on a fake smile

And say, "I can handle it."

But I won't cry

 

You can humiliate me

Crush my soul to nothing

Trick me

Deceive me

Hate me

I'll laugh about it

And lie, "You meant nothing." 

But I won't cry

 

You can say I'm meaningless

And try to stab me in the back

Kill me

Haunt me

Torture me

I'll spit in your face

And give you empty threats

But I will not cry

 

I will not cry

Because I will

Never

Fall to someone like you

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this poem on an emotional fit... what do think of my emotional fit?

Reviews

[Natasha]

the last 4 lines are my favorite. seems like you have gone through a lot in your life!

[Craba]

Oh wow this rocks, loved the opening to this. it's strong.

[Rhea752]

i loved this poem. I wish i could be as strong as that person. :D nicely done

[Marisa Martino]

I can relate to your emotional fit. It is extremely powerful in that triggers the hurt and anguish accompanied by betrayal. I got it..I loved it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Very powerful. Great Job

[Nicole]

this has so much power behind it. i feel like it is such a univeral theme that anyone could relate to it very very easily. on a more personal note, i love the way you've captured the emotion. that kind of anger and resentment is hard to put into words, but you've done an excellent job. very lovely.

[RachelReaper]

thank you... :)

[Mia]

When your emotions run wild within you and threaten to make you lose composure that's when you write the most intense poetry...this is case and point of that very thing. WOW!

[Anna Elizabeth Stanford]

This is really easy to relate to and a really cool piece of writing. It shows that you are strong and that no one can change you. It is inspiring and kept me wanting to read more! Overall I loved this

[RachelReaper]

that's very kind of you to say :)

[Anna Elizabeth Stanford]

i meant every word :D

[MOON]

Your emotional fit is very fitting , descriptive write affirming yourself not breaking down when others want to hurt you.

[Brielle Cartny]

Your emotional fit is very descriptive