No Tears

No Tears

A Poem by RachelReaper
"

I wrote this to no one in particular

"

 

No Tears

You can rip out my heart

Smash it into the floor

Stake me

Choke me

Drown me

I'll put on a fake smile

And say, "I can handle it."

But I won't cry

 

You can humiliate me

Crush my soul to nothing

Trick me

Deceive me

Hate me

I'll laugh about it

And lie, "You meant nothing." 

But I won't cry

 

You can say I'm meaningless

And try to stab me in the back

Kill me

Haunt me

Torture me

I'll spit in your face

And give you empty threats

But I will not cry

 

I will not cry

Because I will

Never

Fall to someone like you

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 RachelReaper


Author's Note

RachelReaper
I wrote this poem on an emotional fit... what do think of my emotional fit?

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Love it! It really triggers the emotions in multiple ways. I especially liked in the last stanza how you said you'd never fall "to" someone like you instead of "for" someone like you. I don't know if it was intentionally planned that way, but it creates such a strong close to a great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harsh in the first few paragraphs, but loved it!



Your words will now haunt me at night! ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


RachelReaper

8 Years Ago

mhahahahaha thank you!
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Pax
yup, its indeed a emotional fit. sad like a battered wife(like in the dramas or in reality). its a well done write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


RachelReaper

8 Years Ago

eheheh... nice interpretation, thank god I'm only fourteen and not a "battered wife" though, because.. read more
Pax

8 Years Ago

hehehe..your a strong courageous person.
RachelReaper

8 Years Ago

thank you :)

"I will not cry
Because I will
Never
Fall to someone like you"........this last line settle it all...i really like it.a very nice poem...seriously.your emotional fit is really great....

"I'll spit in your face
And give you empty threats
But I will not cry".i also liked these lines..it just show the aggression and attitude in it.this poem really carries a very strong emotion..great work keep doing like this

Posted 8 Years Ago


RachelReaper

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :) I'm usually not an aggresive person by any means, but sometimes your pushed to the lim.. read more
The dark story

8 Years Ago

oho.maybe just because i'm an aggressive person i felt that in the poem...and yes you are always wel.. read more
I like the way the paragraphs mimic each other up until the last closing statement. I think this is set apart from every other poem about break ups and romance because it gives something deeper than everyone can relate to; not only people going through a bad romance. I think, for a poem, it has a lot of potential. Just do a little tweaking to make it better and better. Remember, nothing can ever be too perfect :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


loved this!! Your emotional fit was very inspiring to me. Powerful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


what a war cry haha i think that emotional fit was verry befitting... :)) (...for the poem i mean)
Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is one big emotional poem. It is easily relatable. We all do put on a fake smile after all. I enjoyed this poem. Keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pretty awesome emotional fit. I love your last stanza of the poem. Epic~

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like it. This shows emotional strength that I believe people should have. Very well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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