No Tears

No Tears

A Poem by RachelReaper

I wrote this to no one in particular



No Tears

You can rip out my heart

Smash it into the floor

Stake me

Choke me

Drown me

I'll put on a fake smile

And say, "I can handle it."

But I won't cry


You can humiliate me

Crush my soul to nothing

Trick me

Deceive me

Hate me

I'll laugh about it

And lie, "You meant nothing." 

But I won't cry


You can say I'm meaningless

And try to stab me in the back

Kill me

Haunt me

Torture me

I'll spit in your face

And give you empty threats

But I will not cry


I will not cry

Because I will


Fall to someone like you







© 2012 RachelReaper

Author's Note

I wrote this poem on an emotional fit... what do think of my emotional fit?

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I like the writing structure of your poem. You do convey the extreme emotions of disappointing love and hurt over someone's callous attitude. Cry if you need to, slap them silly and say goodby. There's lots of other people who can become real friends and appreciate you.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Wow. This great. I love how strong and angered you sound in the poem. Really, really good :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

O.M.G. This...was breathtaking.It seems like you took the jumbled thoughts and drew thm out into this...its simply beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Pain. I like this piece. Don't cry. I do. 1 tear is my limit. This was a good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is a really emotional poem, that i think will speak to a lot of people. Everybody has pain, right?

Posted 10 Years Ago

i think emotional fits are sometimes good cuz it gives birth to something like this...i have felt like this and i can really relate n the first verse was my favourite....really amazing piece and thanks for commenting on my means a lot:):):):).

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on June 22, 2012
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