Dancing In Love

Dancing In Love

A Poem by RachelReaper

Not to get all sappy on you but I wanted to share this one


Dancing In Love

Catch your heart

With both hands

And promise me

You'll never let me go

Or abandon this

Graceful dance

Of two people falling

Deep in love


Whether its forever

Or wasn't meant for never

To leave or to stay

Or to pray for

This new masquerade

To last into the

Eternal ballroom above


Though this step

May be exhausting

And some would

Say we should


We'll waltz

Because we want to

Not because we have to

And we'll always

Find some way

To make it through


So twirl me

Around the floor

Once more

Before you close

Your eyes and

Whisper in my ear

Those three words

I've been waiting to hear


I don't complicate

Or hesitate

On what I already

Know to be true

So I say,

"I love you, too."








© 2012 RachelReaper

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Awww this made me smile, its lovely. very Romantic

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

Yeah I like it..

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like this. Very romantic and full of true love. You did a really good job on this very enjoyable poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago

ohh that was so sweet...
that romantic moment is a dream for manys.. and you described it well :)
so great.. keep that up :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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i see two dancing feet feeling the rhythm of waltz. sweet and inviting.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like it! It's a cute poem. I like how it's about two people in love

Posted 9 Years Ago

awhhh thats soo sweet

Posted 9 Years Ago

I know I said I'd check out your book...but the title caught my eye;)
I must say it was refreshing and I approve very much:D

Posted 9 Years Ago

I really like how the poem is organized visually. It goes from one side to the other to represent two different minds. Keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Hey!!!!! My name is Rachel, and my unofficial last name is Reaper. I am 14 years old. Blood and kisses to all who review my work, I appreciate it so much and couldn't express to you how much it means .. more..

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