She wants to feel the softness of feathers

She wants to feel the softness of feathers upon the tips of her toes
 Reaching out for comfort that will surely come
Caresses the moments before midnight
With suger kisses so sweet
Like honey coated forgiveness
She smiles into her lovers eyes of crystal dew
Beyond
Her sences reeling
Twirling, dancing
Like the figurine within an ancient music box
As the music surrounds the childs mind so pure
And yet
There is more captured within
The sweetness is soured only by memories
She paints with fingers in the suger
To forget
There are things so worth forgetting
She sees him sleeping and places
mirrors where his eyes once looked upon her
For now she will see herself
The way he see's
The blood from the girl child dried as he slept
There was to be no more sugered moments
No more honey for him to savour
she had seen
Her worth in his eyes
Such a shame sweet child
She should of loved herself with toes touching feathers
Reaching for a comfort
That would only be found in forgiveness of self
Far beyond the place he sleeps
With mirrored eyes of crystal dew

He awakes to find his beloved drenthed in death
He reaches for moments which never come
Her projection of him so false upon this moment
As in a moments seperation
She sees with her angel presence
The suger he tastes on lips so pure
His tears now mingle with the blood
As he tears her mirrors from his eyes
He understands not
The reason
Why white feathers are falling from the sky

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your wondrous descriptions are so filled with heartfelt emotion. There is that longing for life and more... and the letting go in the pain that surrounds and fills the mind... Such a sadly spoken confession...

[Dream Weaver]

Absolutely stunning! A gorgeous melancholy piece
I truly enjoyed this one.

[LozzaPotterInit]

I was mesmerized from the first 2 lines. You have captured the feelings and emotions perfectly. Well done x

[Lily Mae]

"He awakes to find his beloved drenthed in death
He reaches for moments which never come
Her projection of him so false upon this moment
As in a moments seperation
She sees with her angel presence
The suger he tastes on lips so pure
His tears now mingle with the blood
As he tears her mirrors from his eyes
He understands not
The reason
Why white feathers are falling from the sky"

You have channeled for me a beauty ;) xxx this is a masterpiece and written by divine inspiration.. as he tears her mirrors from his eyes... damn nice Pebs...xx

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

So beautiful. Your poetry has grown in leaps and bounds since I first began reading you.......lovely!

[Richielee]

fooking heck Pebs!!!!!outstanding, on top form today aren't you ? xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

What an outstanding poem. This is amazing. Loved reading it. You penned it brilliantly.