Why Am I Feeling Like This?

It all happened suddenly...

We have sudden instincts...

Happiness...

Sadness...

These doesn't fail to make us cry...

Our emotions is always unexpected

Our mouth speaks unexpected

I myself experienced this

Yesterday,

We drove

Hours

To the beach

When we got there

I saw

The sun flickering from the water

The water

A perfect mirror

White sand

The deep silent

of the gentle waves....

Crashing gently

And then suddenly

I whispered...

"I'm home"....

Is it my heart

Whispering...  

 

 

 

       

Reviews

[samantha munning]

it had very deep emotions
i liked it

[paradoxical]

Some others have already mentioned that there were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, so leaving that aside- I really like this. I like to think of it as your heart hijacking your mouth. Our hearts should hijack our mouths more often, in my opinion. A very pretty visual, and I really liked the flow as well. Thanks for sharing, and thank you for the friend request. :)

[~Beautiful Dreamer~]

its really really good :)

[Poetic Beauty]

It is amazing how different places make us feel. We can feel truly at home in places we have just discovered or in places that have been with us through all the years. The details and emotions are projected clearly allowing me to see the stunning view and breathe that sigh of contentment found in "home"

[Brianna Van Zandt]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, though there are a few spelling/grammar errors that are easily fixable. "These doesn't" should be either "This doesn't" or "These don't". The only other error I saw was the line that says "Our mouth speaks unexpected," which only tripped me up because of the way it sounds. Should it be "Our mouths speak unexpectedly"? I don't know, I mean, every writer's mind is unique, so that could just be how your mind saw it and how it flows best for you. I just wanted to put it out there that it didn't sound like it flowed right to me. Still an absolutely amazing piece. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A simple yet evocative piece that rides high with emotion.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Very nice. Good poem to read.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

A very pretty, sympathetic poem. I really enjoyed this.

[reflectingus]

Beautiful, I loved how you related the beginning with an example. Sometimes, emotions just flow through you, unexpected things happen, and it doesn't fail to surprise you, that's one of the beautiful things about life. Great read.

[quarintine_deathangel]

Totally relateable XD You put the happening under a curious and ponderable idea though, it's inticing to think about... I find my unconsious loves to speak for itself whenever it can too XD