Beauty in Tears

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!

       I hate it all of it!

             Damn it all!!

              Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

 I hate the fact.....

              That's she's in love with him....

                            That my life is a totally not the way I want it.....

                                           That my body is weak and frail, not like his, that brute guardian....

                                               

I...want ..to escape

From my messed up place

There's so many ways to escape 

Like books

But that's what I always do....escape.....

You can judge me

But I don't really care 

But when is the time...

I will find a place....

With no tears

So I'm crying out

 Each tear filled with beauty

Of my despair...

              

Reviews

[Mary Christabel George]

precise and beautiful

[exotic flotsam]

A poignant manifesto on immutable emotional suffering. No escape accompanies deferred desire. Broken hearts attatch to everything or anything. Time's passing dulls the rapier edge of tearful despair. But there is no cure. I'll send you a 5-7-5 senyru I wrote, that you might find yourself with company. Nice outpouring Dark.

The Teardrop

We talked so deeply
A single tear empties me
You pushed me away

[samantha munning]

i can feel ur meaning behind this
i love it well done

[Poetic Beauty]

There is a dark beauty in sadness but also tear.are the way for the soul to release the hurt and wash it clean

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Heartbreak can drive a person to find an escape, whether it be drugs, alcohol, food, or even books... you have written a very emotional piece and it has been expressed well. Nice work!

[Brianna Van Zandt]

This was very well written. Very emoional too. I liked it.

[....]

ever so powerful and deep, so nicely expressed, love the set up