A Poem by <Abby.Autopsy>

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There is a burden on my back....

It's heavy....

Like Guilt.....that sinks in.....ever staying.....and ever changing......



But never LEAVING. 



But a hand reached down.....just as I fell.....and wiped my tears.....



And brushed the burden from my back as if it were a small pebble......



Yet no matter what.......how many times the One could help......I'd pick the burden up again...



And carry it on.....until finally......He took it over.......and carried it......




.......................TO THE CROSS

© 2008 <Abby.Autopsy>

Author's Note

please comment. I'm open to anything....even if it's something negative

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Oh, I really like this. The elipses (. . .'s) add so much to the heavy, whiny, foreverness that comes with a burden. Yes, He took my icky burden to the Cross too. I'm just learning to give it all over, everything, to Him. Love it, love it, love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

thankyou i just kind of sat down and wrote it one day because i was bored and it came out...idk what i do but i just kind of write what is on my heart and mind at the time i guess. i get things like this inspired by my youth group friends. it's great to have people like that to inspire you and im nothing without them.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I loved it. Very deep and very abstract. I like how you made it slow and subtle. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on August 16, 2008
Last Updated on August 30, 2008



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