Shawn Lee

Shawn Lee

A Poem by Lil Guppy



I look around to find her
She's a sight one cannot miss
My emotions begin to tangle and blur
All I want is one sweet kiss

Silk and gold will never compare
Is that her I see?
Blowing wind tossles her hair
Oh no! It cannot be!

At our house, I see my brother using his charms
I said I wouldn't care
She soon ends up in his arms
This I truly couldn't bare

How could mother do this to me?!
Why did it have to be Shawn Lee?



© 2013 Lil Guppy


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Nice rhyme! The picture matches perfectly too! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lil Guppy

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
That is very cool, I can't write Sonnets, but yours is so beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lil Guppy

10 Years Ago

Thanks! ^_^
AdorableDreams

10 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
Ah! A sonnet! This is exceptionally brilliant. Brilliant flow, nice and effective words. All written in a nice way.
The couplet takes a great entry. If anyone was thinking about romantic the message gets totally cleared in the couplet, which is a tradition of sonnet. Very well written. A nice piece worth reading. Write on :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lil Guppy

10 Years Ago

Im glad you enjoyed it! Thanks! :)
Shivam Murari

10 Years Ago

:)

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Added on May 23, 2013
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