You And I

You And I

A Poem by Lilac Lilies
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A fictional free verse poem, if that's what you'd call this poem

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Dancing around happily
You and me

Then we go somewhere high
Then you start to fly
Right into the sky

My heart starts to race
Why didn’t you take me there with you

© 2022 Lilac Lilies


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This has a dream-like quality to it. In dreams we can do anything (sometimes) but when we awake we are back down to boring reality.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Although I'm sure this is meant to be innocent, it sounds like someone took an overdose and died. Just my weird interpretation.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on July 19, 2022
Last Updated on July 19, 2022
Tags: Dancing, Fly, Sky, You, Me, Why, Heart

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