Temptation to Sin

Temptation to Sin

A Poem by Jaded rose

TEMPTATION TO SIN

 I sit here thinking of my sins
Overwhelmed by just how many there are
But my biggest sin is YOU
Tempting from the day I met you
Bombarding my brain with thoughts of you
I knew that temptation was setting in
When I looked at you and thought of kissing you
Temptation was full blown when my thoughts went to making love to you
Why, oh why---did you have to be my temptation
I did not want to sin with you
You would not leave me alone
STOP being so nice to me
You make me sick because you make me laugh at you
Now you are constantly on my mind
How can I get you out of my brain
Now you kissed me and, oh, so well
I fit so well against your body
Now it is a thin line between temptation and sin
Then one day temptation turned into full blown sin
What am I to do now
Guilt befalls me for following through
And, YET, I do not feel the guilt
Now I just want to know--
When can I sin with you again

© 2009 Jaded rose


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The intensity here is apparent, sin is unavoidable with some people!

Posted 9 Years Ago


good poem. question for you though...what is the difference between sin and temptation. And why feel the guilt, if it/he feels so damn right and good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Temptation as one reader put it can sometimes become full blown love...this piece was raw and very well expressed...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Sounds like a sticky situation...
poem was raw...and i can relate.

Good write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


NOT A LITTLE IN LOVE FOR YOU THERE SEEMS ONLY ALL OR NOTHIN

Posted 10 Years Ago


Temptation is something we as humans live with everyday and I think we live with the consequences of our actions...Temptation is sometimes all we face...and if that is all we face how can we refuse? This piece is well written, honest and raw oh and I can't forget WELL said and beautifully written!

Janice Ann

Posted 10 Years Ago


^.^ Sometimes that tempting sin can become something so beautiful and wonderful, though...like full-blown love! My hunnie bunnie is the love of my life...and he was that rotten little temptation that was extreme from the first moment I laid eyes on him. Still is...the lil s**t.... -.-

Cute poem...it's easy to relate to. Great job! :) I hope your tempting little sin is worthy of you!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice written, I totally feel this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


very good. Love the imagery that you write/present here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I disagree with Lady V. Don't stay away from us men just some of them. LOL. This poem speaks from everyone heart on this site. To write poetry is to live and if you have live you have expereinced what it is you wrote about. If it wasn't for the temptation to commit sin I probably would not be a writer if that is what I am. I have to channel that energy somewhere so I choose a pen and pad!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Jaded rose
Jaded rose

Charlotte, NC



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Writing is my NEED to unclutter life. It eases my stress. Wish I had more time to write and read poetry. It touches my soul and clears the negativity at times. Thank you for sharing your work and .. more..

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