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TAKE OVER

TAKE OVER

A Poem by Jaded rose

TAKE OVER
 
Alarm blaring in my ear
Waking and groaning as I hit the clock
Falling back on the pillow
Wondering if I could pull off calling in sick
My next thought is of you
Wishing you were my excuse for staying in bed today
Snuggling up to my pillow for fifteen minutes more
Thinking of your warm body next to mine
Also of your 2am phone-sex call
Does that count in the booty call category
Pushing myself from the bed
Starting my day dripping with need for you
Driving to work with clips of you and I together
As the day progresses my thoughts keep coming back to you
Listening to audiobooks, certain parts make me need you more
My ride back home for a half hour is filled by you
Coming home busy with this and that
Still you keep entering my mind
My day has been consumed by you
Now as I lay myself down to sleep
I wonder, will my dreams be of you
And if you will take over my thoughts again tomorrow

© 2010 Jaded rose


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I agree with Beth, I love the way you captured this need. Very heartfelt and endearing. Beautifully written...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hey Jade, you know i am a fan of yours i love this piece. I could highlight the whole poem but what bought me to my feet was this stanza;

Starting my day dripping with need for you
Driving to work with clips of you and I together
As the day progresses my thoughts keep coming back to you

If a women spoke that way to me I'll be shopping for a ring. LOL. Great work thanks for the awesome mental ride. I'll be back!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love the way you have captured the essence of needing someone, to the extent where you literally cannot stop thinking about them. Well done!

-Beth

Posted 9 Years Ago


oooooh! nice! heart-warming...that yearning for more after you've been graced with the presence of your heart-throb! man, I love this 1!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Jaded rose
Jaded rose

Charlotte, NC



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Writing is my NEED to unclutter life. It eases my stress. Wish I had more time to write and read poetry. It touches my soul and clears the negativity at times. Thank you for sharing your work and .. more..

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