COLD WAR OF LOVE

Love is an array of emotions and this shows the conflict.

 

COLD WAR OF LOVE

 

The ground is covered with snow

There are red puddles of blood everywhere

Bodies lying all around

In the center sits the woman

Covered with a thin blanket and crying

She holds in her hands a thumping heart

The thumping is slowly coming to a halt

She looks down at the heart noticing that it is hers

In her mind she reviews the war she raged

Trying desperately to save her heart from the hurt of love

Looking at the bodies of the men that have fallen

Why did they have to treat her the way they did

She would not have lashed out the way she did

Action begets reaction...wound for wound

Now she is looking at the wounded and her own heart

Wondering whether love will die in this field

Or somehow will someone be able to resurrect it

Amazed that love and hate can be so intermingled

Loving the men laying at her feet for who they were

Hating them for how they have ripped her heart from her body

Looking at her heart wanting it to beat again

Considering that it may be too cold to come to life

She stands, walking to the edge of the field

Turning again, wanting to see the bodies she left behind

She falls, hoping and praying someone good will catch her

Warming her heart up from the cold war of love

Reviews

[Ladysue]

This was extraordinary scene you have written. Extremely powerful. Love can be a really tough ordeal and the pain you have captured quite strongly in this piece. Very well done...

[THE LOST ROSE]

I love the visual you painted. Kinda of dark but yet it sounds like a transformation from something old to something new. You as a woman do not want to be treated the same way ever again. I enjoyed this raw feel your words bought to me. You are on a creative high, don't come down to soon!