Lonely

you don’t really know me

but you text me late at night

when you’re lonely.

don’t want to hold me,

just unfold me.

then crumple me up like paper,

toss me out

until you need me for later.

I’m finally moving onto the

new me,

but you’re still holding onto

the old me.

god what makes you so damn

lonely.

so lonely that you need

to empty your sadness

in me.

Reviews

[maggie hurley-boyd]

Damn, that's really good.
Love how loneliness is being portrayed into this piece, how real the emotions and how real this is. Rather than sugar coding how your feeling.
Good Job!

[poetgurl]

god what makes you so damn
lonely.
so lonely that you need
to empty your sadness
in me.

This part is so amazing!
love the loneliness feel of this write.
very nice read

[k.s.]

Thank you so much!