Baby, I swear Your The Cheese To My Macoroni

Baby, I swear Your The Cheese To My Macoroni

A Poem by laughinglullaby
"

were only cute cause everyone says so

"

Color me beautiful.

Make me brand new.

Take all the pieces,

Put me together agian.

I need you to.

 Say you'll love me,

I already love you back.

Tell me you need me,

Because your everything I lack.

Desperet maybe.

Tell me youll be my man,

I swear I'll be your lady.

Love me like you hate them.

I need you to.

So color me beautiful,

Make me brand new

Take all these peices

I'll give them to you.

© 2011 laughinglullaby


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The title is pure classic!! I'm still chuckling at it. The poem that goes with it is good too. It's light hearted, easy to read, and flows nicely. All in all, good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The title alone was worth the admission :))

Yes, desperate love, but hey, what love isn't to at least some degree.

Really cute with enough meaning to have it all make sense.

Enjoyed!
Antonio

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting thoughts in this writing. I like the opposites in this poem as they do attract and I sense a bit of sarcasm between the words. Which I always like. "Love me like you hate them" this was the interesting part because hate is such a strong emotion so love must be even stronger or at least equal. I enjoyed this read, very good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


So this sounds like a song. A really sappy love song. Like by Paul MacCartney. But I like it. In a really sappy, the-way-I-like-Paul-MacCartney way.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww!! This is SWEET!! :) Very beautiful job with this hehe! I thought the title was cute, too lol! Lovely :)

M.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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