How It Should Be

I just made something up. Please don't judge me too bad!!!!!!!!!

I should be,

wrapped up in your arms.

 

I should be,

By your side all the time.

 

I should be,

Your very first kiss.

 

But,

You chose her.

 

She,

Is wrapped up in your arms.

 

She,

Is by your side all the time.

 

She,

Was your very first kiss.

 

But,

How it should be,

 

Is with me.

Reviews

[sarah]

I feel this way about a guy I get this great write I enjoyed it and I could relate to the feelings

[Lemon-Eater]

its really good em! i like it

[MunkeeFareek]

This is great! I know I say that on all your stuff, but I really mean it. Great Job!

[Fanfiction Girl]

wow I really Love this!!! I can kinda relate to this!!!!!

AMAZING job!!!!!!!!!

[Lime-Eater]

I don't really like it. But, I'm trying to improve my poetry skills and stuff. PLEASE don't judge me too bad!!!!!!!!!