Not even here

I can hear the sounds

Belowing and echoing

Bouncing off my walls

Tearing down these halls

My heart is torn to pieces

Tattered and ragged

When there's no saving it

There's only swallowing it

Nothing has changed,

I'm still that same person

Sitting in the corner doing something wrong.

Author's Note

Not even here anymore.

Reviews

[Roxie M]

"My heart is torn to pieces

Tattered and ragged

When there's no saving it

There's only swallowing it" These words evoke emotion due great despair and tragedy. Whew! Strong!

[R Smith]

brilliant writing Limno, I love the flow and rhyme and the passion and sense of melancholy, doing something wrong? I'd say doing a lot right :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Wow this is awesome. I loved every word of it. Great one Limno :D

[dan]

A very thoughtful and thought provoking piece. I read it three times and absorbed more of its meaning each time. Very well done! take care...dan

[Confuser]

Limno; I enjoyed it and suppose everybody feels that way at one time or another - very well written; the visual is wonderful and heartbreak hurts. Pain can pull us down, but hopefully we can all get back up. Thank you...Dale

[B]

I love it
Sitting in the corner doing something wrong

Having the world talk about it
With a broken heart

It never helps

I love it

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered!
I can relate to this sometimes:(
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know.
"Nothing has changed,
I'm still that same person"
I believe every action and movement we do. Changes us. Heartbreak make the heart less trustworthy of love dance. A powerful poem. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Perkele.7885]

Some things take time to get out of our systems. When I got out of the service, I still found myself automatically waking up at 4:30 am when there was no reason that I could not sleep in for hours more. We have become automated without realizing it.
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