Poetry in Motion

Its just my take

Its strange how poems change before our eyes
somehow metaphor into another better being
than first we thought

But how or why, i have often wondered
never yet concluding, left open to all debate.

The written words seem to blossom and grow
have a life of their own
devoid of any action on the writers part
and somehow something quite different
Is born of our imagination

Reviews

[Chelsea]

I really like it. Your take on poetry is neat!
I can relate to the first stanza. Most people who aren't crazy for poetry think I'm nuts when I try and get them to understand the metaphors! Well an inside joke for us I guess----

The written words seem to blossom and grow
have a life of their own - Those are my favourite lines in your poem. They are very nicely said (good imagery) and mean so much. A line just seems to get better and better each time we read!
Really well done, added to my favourites!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You have taged us all so well! Wonderfully written!

[xjust-for-me.x]

But that is the mind of poet and writer what they think sometimes come out differently on paper. that is why we write.

[Ladysue]

oh you expressed this so well...so true...that is exactly how it goes...great job....

[Angela Mulley]

There are no conclusions, indeed... this is poetry! Great write!

[Ruth]

It sure is, we can start with an idea and the idea goes wayward and changes whenever it wishes LMAO
Excellent poem
xx

[Moflo]

That is true...very very deep poem, really got my mind thinking. What we create takes on a life of its own and it becomes devoid of us and allowed to run free. Fantastic write.

[cfix]

This is wonderful, I like this.
Love the last stanza, the best.
Very nicely done!

[Cynthia]

oh, thats amazing, magic is always under your pen, and I agree with you, words seems to shine and glow when we write it, I so keep a journal as well, I guesss thats help ;)

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

=) we're but conduits for our muses and those beings and ideas they create through us