The Greatness

It's a lonely place, but the bubbles will help to ease that pain..

Cyanide and Happiness

Angels in dreams

Purple streamers in the bath

Forever in stitches and seams

 

I could tell you how the bubbles float around my scars under

my chin. How they clean the dirtiness from under my skin. I’ve been gone for

so long now it’s unreal. Like the papers that dropped

from the floor to my face, the letter from clean hands to lap. I’ve seen it all. Done

it all. Lost it all. Gambled my life away in the heart of a babe. Eyes too cold for blue

ice. When the bubbles stop floating around my scars under my chin. When they

leave the dirtiness under my skin. That’s when you’ll know I lost it all.

 

Cyanide and Happiness

Angels in dreams

Purple streamers in the bath

Forever in stitches and seams

Author's Note

All of my poetry comes from the heart.

Reviews

[Acer]

Cyanide and Happiness
Angels in dreams
Purple streamers in the bath
Forever in stitches and seams
......
lovely write indeed. Hoe did you get the idea ?>may if i ask

[Wild Willow Blue]

Thank you so much. Most of my poems start as just sentences I make up in my head. I almost never have a clear vision of what I'm going to write about. It just happens. I find that the best poems are the ones you don't know you're going to write.

[Acer]

& I think you do always best.

[Wild Willow Blue]

Thank you :)

[Acer]

My pleasure, :)*,..may i've ask, how did you get the idea for poem ...!!

[Wild Willow Blue]

Well, there's a comic strip I like called Cyanide and Happiness. I thought of those two words and the rest came out.

[Acer]

OK...thanks' :*)

[Wild Willow Blue]

You're welcome. I hope I helped, if that's what you were looking for.

[Acer]

If i truly say, then i wasn't looking for, i was asking about your powerful words.

[Wild Willow Blue]

:) thank you, again.

[Acer]

I should have to say you "Thank-you", that you'd dropped it here & shared with me/us indeed.

[Wild Willow Blue]

How sweet. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[Acer]

so, nice, glad to heard it.

[Kianna L. Bearden]

Your poetry is always so beautiful and well written. Enough said!

[Wild Willow Blue]

Thank you for your review. Very thoughtful!

[Shy Girl]

Your poems certainally do come from deep inside your heart. This was beautiful...but I agree with Virtuosa down there..it does read as though somebody is trying to say goodbye to their life. Rawness comes to mind...vast well of emotion as well. :)

[Virtuosa X]

Beautiful poem. Sounds like a fancy suicide note but I like it. Deep and real.
Keep up the good work.

[just is]

beautiful write, enjoyed

[Voncloud]

wow, i like the repetition of the 1st and last stanza, it makes it sound like a song and it sounds very fitting. The minor rhyming scheme also sounds perfect for this one. I've always liked he way you portray emotion and in this one its no different, very cool. Keep Writing.

[SeventhSin]

So beautiful and well put together. :) Really liked this!!

[nigrum homonculus]

this is very well structured. i agree with odayin, it most definately sounds like a song in a way. your words clearly painted an image in my head. fed my imagination well. well done!

[Odayin]

Almost sounds like a song.
This has really good meaning, descriptions, and ideas.
I really liked it. Great job, keep it up

[allie_arrowz]

that's really beautiful, your emotion is very strong.