Creative Bone

Yikes....I am just refounding my love of poetry. Somehow I just can't stop the chanting in my head....writing it all down.....

A buried bone most fragile
In the garden of the soul
Lies waiting like a fertile seed,
a quivering newborn foal.

Roots of steely violence course
through velvet fecund soil
Tendril shoots, hot manic probes,
Seek sun to writhe and coil.

The blistering fevered work of growth,
of sprouting and of change.
The font of life beats wings of wrath,
boundryless and strange.

What fuels the monstrous beast to rise,
the wicked wondrous thing?
Unseasoned and unbridled,
a fledgling taking wing.
Mysterious and fathomless,
designed to coalesce.
Sentient bright existence
Creative labor bless

Reviews

[Lindsay T]

Wow, this is beautiful. You have a stunning way of expressing yourself and choosing the correct vocabulary words to do this job.

Suggestion: I find it easier to read a poem when it's separated into stanzas, instead of one long paragraph. It might be a good idea to separate your work into, say, four line paragraphs instead.

Anyway, great job! Loved it.

[lisaluree]

Thank you so much for reviewing this poem for me! I do need to work on punctuation/formatting....somehow I have a bit on trouble in that area!
Thank you again!

[Harmonica winds]

deep write that is powerful, wonderfully expressed : )

[Owlgirl]

I love the different descriptions you use and your word choice is exceptional. You may want to work on formatting/punctuation to help the flow be consistant, though the poem is really lovely as is. I can't wait to read more by you!