Re-born

Re-born

A Poem by Little Birdie
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Admiring the view?

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Full are your ample lips
and you reek of
silver gunpowder
mixed with musk and
coffee and something
so yours, it conceals my dilemma
and I can't escape, though I
don't really want to.

“Admiring the view?“ You ask,

and how can I not when
your glowing orbs are the
deepest shade of brown,
your alabaster skin smoother than silk,
hair unruly, untamed,
unlike yourself, your strong arms
secure and your existence, merely a storm
that has finally found me

and insists it's all mine.

© 2012 Little Birdie


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"...something so yours..." succinct yet allusive; gorgeous.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your style reads not unlike the marvelous Sara Teasdale. Women churn with creation itself, it sometimes difficult to bear their own particular fire of beauty.

I found the second stanza exceedingly strong.

Posted 12 Years Ago


your poems are tall, the flight of your words swift and strong

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very poetic... very well written... most enjoyable to read. Well done.
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a divinly written write,
Nicely written, enjoyed!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Little Birdie
Little Birdie

Rijeka, Croatia



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